COPY: Throughout SITE (grammar, persuasiveness and effectiveness) - Final clean

[dsjoerg]

[dsjoerg]

From @seeyew:

Showed a VC/product friend Hillarybnb.com yesterday, he was impressed and suggested the following texts. Just a suggestion anyway so take it or leave it.

Welcome to Home Sharing for Hillary!
Home Sharing for Hillary is a way for Hillary supporters going to DNC to stay with other supporters.
(Note that we are not affiliated with AirBnb)

Of course the going to part should be changed accordingly. Just a suggestion and thought I should pass along

[NanKrafft]

@alittlecynical

[NanKrafft]

Email Copy should for sure be updated.

Current:

"Hi Nan ,

Thanks for registering with HillaryBNB! Click the URL below to confirm your registration:

HillaryBNB - Confirm Your Email

Legal Disclaimer: By agreeing to use this service, you hereby agree to waive any and all claims arising from your use of this service against the Hillary Clinton campaign, any groups associated with the Hillary Clinton campaign, and DevProgress."

[NanKrafft]

Doc With copy edits

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cxThVacGKHSMLKl6MX5CpEasXvj613l2f9eOo8MLXJQ/edit?ts=57fbfeff