Revise text for clarity and emphasis on learning

Author: mar-san1

index.html

@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ <h1 class="text-4xl sm:text-5xl font-extrabold text-gray-900 leading-tight mb-3"
 
             <section class="mb-16 sm:mb-20">
                 <p class="text-xl sm:text-2xl font-light text-center leading-relaxed max-w-4xl mx-auto">
-                    We are uncovering better ways of learning and teaching in a world of profound technological change and constant distraction. Through this work, we have come to value:
+                    We are re-thinking how we learn and teach in a world shaped by profound technological change and constant distraction. Through this work, we are making explicit the principles and practices we believe best support meaningful learning, and we have come to value:            
                 </p>
                 <div class="grid grid-cols-1 md:grid-cols-2 gap-8 text-center mt-12">
                     <div class="flex flex-col items-center p-4">