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@Enki10 Enki10 commented Sep 18, 2022

Changed a few sentences that the translatorbot makes too weird to read

Changed a few sentences that the translatorbot makes too weird to read
@Enki10 Enki10 marked this pull request as ready for review September 18, 2022 12:57
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Thank you @Enki10. I'm inviting the Spanish stewards @Guirdo, @Andreu-G, and @dnd-alv to review this.

¡p5.js es una biblioteca de JavaScript para la programación creativa, que
busca hacer que programar sea accesible e inclusivo para artistas,
¡p5.js es una biblioteca de JavaScript para la programación creativa que
se enfoque en que programación sea accesible e inclusivo para artistas,
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I think it would be like this:
"se enfoca en que la programación"

p1x2: >-
Usando la metáfora de bosquejear, p5.js tiene un conjunto completo de
funcionalidades para dibujar. Sin embargo, no estás limitado solo a dibujar
funcionalidades de dibujo. Sin embargo, no limita solo a dibujar
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The english version of this line is addressed personally:
"However, you’re not limited to your drawing canvas"

So it should be: "Sin embargo, no estás limitado" as the previous version.

download11: 'http://localhost:{your-port-num}/empty-example'
download4: >-
Si revisas el archivo index.html, te darás cuenta que tiene un enlace al
Si miras al archivo index.html, verás que tiene un enlace al
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I think "Si revisas el" is better because "miras al" sounds weird

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Thanks @Guirdo for sharing the feedback. @Enki10, please let us know if you need any help make the changes.

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Hi @Enki10, just to double check with you about the feedback. Please let us know you could make the suggested changes. Otherwise, we might have to overwrite them. Thanks!

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