Update elispelem.org to simplify and clarify language #7
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Hi Prot,
I was reading your text, and was sometimes surprised by your choice of words. The haste in producing the first version is especially clear towards the end of the text.
I happen to be on holiday, so I thought to try to make it easier to understand by replacing the more complex expressions with plainer English. I am not a native English speaker myself either, but I have some experience in writing British English.
Please take these changes as suggestions in the spirit of sharing the workload to make your excellent text even easier to approach to a wider audience.
Yours sincerely,